Huellas en la niebla (final)

La mujer miraba hacia todos lados frenéticamente, Sergio la saluda y ella reacciona con un llanto y negativas desesperadas.
El contemplaba el exótico cuadro en silencio. Había estado en situaciones insólitas antes, pero esto superaba todo. Cuando finalmente reacciono, le dijo a la mujer que era una locura estar en un bosque, en medio de la nada y a esa hora. Pero ella seguía mirando al bosque y la niebla, como si la llamaran desde algún lugar. No había caso, tenia que irse.
En un intento de hacerla entrar en razones, se ofreció a llevarla con el auto, pero ella no sabia donde iba. Le pidió un vaso con agua y se fue por donde vino, por la niebla. El se reía del evento extraño, mientras despegaba los riñones quemados y la cochambre de la sarten. Esa noche Sergio no pudo dormir.
Durante doce noches consecutivas la exalacion brumosa del bosque cubrió la atmósfera. Y con la neblina, venia la mujer. Ambos llegaron a conocerse muy bien. Comieron juntos varias veces, charlaron de sus vidas, de amores pasados y de lo que los llevo a conocerse ahí, en medio de la nada, en medio de un bosque.
Ella había enviudado muy joven. Su reciente marido había fallecido en un accidente automovilístico. Había recibido una suma importante con la indemnización del seguro, lo suficiente para mantenerse, pero el dolor de la perdida había sido terriblemente insoportable.
Pasaron los años, dos, tres, quien sabe. Su familia sanguínea y política le aconsejaban continuar con su vida pero ella no podía.
Decidió cortar lazos. Entre soportar el dolor agobiada por gente intrusiva y soportarlo en soledad, eligió lo segundo. Compro una casa en el bosque y se fue a vivir ahí
A la semana de estar en su nueva morada, conoció un hombre que paseaba cerca todas las noches a la misma hora. Era evidente por su forma de contarlo que se enamoraron, pero subitamente, el hombre dejo de aparecer. Varios días después, ella salio a buscarlo por los senderos borroneados de neblina. Jamas lo encontró.
Sergio empezó a pasar todo el día esperando la llegada de la niebla, porque eso implicaba la llegada de ella, la llegada de Cintia. Dejo la casa a medio terminar, dejo de pensar en Maria. Solo ocupaba su mente con la silueta de esa mujer misteriosa que aparecía con la niebla, caminando descalza en un bosque, excusándose con la búsqueda de un ser querido para llegar hasta la puerta de su morada, a pedirle agua y charlar con ell. Ya era innegable, se había enamorado perdidamente de ella.
Esa noche vendría y le diría que no lo deje nunca mas. Ya podía imaginar el tacto de su cuerpo, la timidez de una boca sedienta de pasión siendo por fin, después de tanto tiempo, saciada. La calidez de sus abrazos, el olor de su pelo, la fragilidad de su voz susurrando su nombre al oído. Esa noche seria mágica. Pero esa noche ella no vino.
Cuatro noches pasaron sin que Cintia volviera. Cuatro noches esperando fervientemente... ¡Cuatro noches!
Al anochecer del quinto día, cuando la niebla empezaba a rezumar entre los brotes y las hojas, Sergio salio a buscarla.
La poca visión entorpecía el caminar entre arbustos espinosos y ramas de arboles a la altura de la cara. Se lanzaba a la trabajosa marcha en el bosque nocturno sin tener idea de dirección ni guiá, lo único importante, era encontrarla a ella.
Quien sabe cuanto tiempo anduvo a la luz de la luna, rodeado de bruma espesa, cuando de improvisto, se topo con una casa de ladrillos rojos. -¡Es ahí!- Se dijo con alegría. El corazón le palpitaba con mas rapidez a medida que se acercaba. -Es ahí- era lo único que tenia en mente y llamo a la puerta con tropelía. Una mujer completamente desconocida abrió la puerta.
Desesperado, Sergio le describió a la mujer de la casa de ladrillos rojos como era Cintia, la persona que estaba buscando. La dueña de casa le dijo que no conocía a nadie así.
Furioso, Sergio siguió su tortuosa búsqueda en la nada, en el bosque, en la niebla.
Salio varias veces a buscarla, y siempre se topo con la misma casa de ladrillos rojos. Eventualmente la neblina cubrió todo, y el, no pudo salir nunca mas de ahí; condenado a una existencia vaporosa y difuminada, en la búsqueda eterna. Y aquella mujer desconocida, desde su casa de rojos ladrillos, extrañándolo.

20 comentarios:

Gari Valenz dijo...

Oh, muy lindo, todo un círculo vicioso de amor y decepción hasta la eternidad.

Muy bueno.
Saludos.

Thotila dijo...

Me alegra que le haya gustado. La idea era un poco esa, la circularidad.

Saludos.

Eugenia dijo...

disculpe mi ignorancia, ¿qué es cochambre?

me imaginé el bosque y todos esos aconteceres... me pregunto que andará leyendo usted.

saludos!!

Thotila dijo...

La cochambre es el producto de la quema de zancocho. No confundir con "cipitróito", que es una pieza del paralanque.

Estoy leyendo "En el camino" de Kerouac.

No se si esa es la palabra o no, yo le digo asi. Cochambre es lo que queda en la sarten cuando se quema la comida, mas precisamente carne. Esa mezcla de restos de comida, sangre y grasa quemada, costrosa en algunos lados, pastosa en otros.

Saludos.

Eugenia.- dijo...

Hey, es genial el desenlace! Apaerte pensalo estmaos tan encerrados en nosotros mismos que no vemos el efecto que causamos. so true.

Bah me hizo pensar en banda de boludeces:P y hacer pensar nunca es malo.

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Pensar no es PRO.
Me las confundi, pense que usted habia comentado antes... me olvide del .-
Buena apreciacion la suya, yo no la habia pensado, solamente lo puse porque me parecio que estaria bueno, je.

Si este le gusto, el proximo le va a encantar!

Beso de vuelta.

Viejex dijo...

No esperaba el final. Me sorprendió.

Thotila dijo...

Me alegra. ¿Donde hubiera estado la gracia si el final fuera predecible?

Saludos.

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